John Thornhill’s Internet Marketing Master Class Coaching Program Week 13!
Hello All,
Welcome to Week 13 of John Thornhill’s Internet Marketing Training Masterclass Coaching Program.
This week was another quite week! Yippy!
The main focus for this week was reviewing our first draft so without further comment lets begin with this weeks tasks…….
Internet Marketing Masterclass Week 13: Review First Draft
No videos for this week!
We were sent our welcome letter and our usual checklist of what tasks we needed to do for the week.
Our main focus this week was completing the first draft, reviewing it, and adding in more content if need be to create a final first draft.
Week 13 Summary
According to John the first thing we need to do when reviewing our first draft of our ebook is to actually read it!
While reading the draft, make notes and add more content if we think areas need more information. Change the spelling if we notice spelling mistakes, edit grammar if we notice content not making any sense etc etc.
Once we have done this to our first draft John recommends taking a day or 2 off and then repeat the process of editing again for the second time!
Once we have our second review copy completed it is recommended to take another day or 2 off and repeat the process of editing for a third time!
Once we have reviewed our ebook at least 3-4 times we should have our ebook near completion and ready for someone else to review and edit! (This was the nervous part!
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A little hint on editing: When I was at the editing part of my first draft one of the best things that helped me edit was to actually read my ebook aloud. For example I read the book as if I was reading it to someone that couldn’t read, even though there was just me in the room. This may sound silly to some, however I found doing this helped me focus on my editing and I was able to pick up grammar mistakes quickly.
Another option is you could record yourself reading the book and listen back to it in stages.
Week 13 Checklist:
Our checklist tasks for week 13 were:
- Read and review our first draft of our ebook and make any necessary changes
- Have 2 days off
- Read and review our ebook draft for a second time and make any necessary changes
- Have 2 days off
- Read and review our ebook draft for a third time and make any necessary changes
- Visit the masterclass forum and communicate with fellow students
- Continue visiting fellow student and marketers blogs and make comments where appropriate
- Continue posting to our own blogs
Again this week was a fairly quiet week focusing completely on finishing our final first draft ready for someone to review next week.
OK so that is week 13 wrapped up.
So until next time……..
Enjoy Your Learning!
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Hi again Jacinta!
Great tips as always, and that’s good advice from John about taking a break for a couple of days, all that checking and editing can get a bit much day after day.
And you’re only up writing about week 13, WOW!… Plently more for me and the rest of your readers to look forward to then.
I’ll be checking back for the next instalment soon!
Paul
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Jacinta
Reply:
December 2nd, 2009 at 4:05 pm
Hi Paul,
Thank you for popping by!
John’s course was only meant to be 36 weeks and we are still being sent videos. we are up to week 42 now!
I am trying to get the posts written up as quickly as I can. I want to have a few pre loaded for over the Christmas period. Hopefully I will be posting one about every three days, but don’t quote me on that!
Hope all is going well. See you on your blog soon!
Jacinta
Twitter: barry_wells
on December 1st, 2009 at 11:32 pm
Hi Jacinta, as you know i’ve been around for a while due to my mum being very unwell.
I’m now trying to catch up and have been visiting the blogs of those people that helped me out with support through that very difficult time.
I have to say that your blog has come along really well, best of luck to you my friend.
I’d also like to say “Thanks for the support you gave while my mum was at deaths door”. You all helped a great deal.
Regards, Barry
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Jacinta
Reply:
December 2nd, 2009 at 4:08 pm
Hi Barry,
Good to see you back online!
We are a internet family now so we all need the support and encouragement we can get. I do hope your mum is recovering slowly.
My aunt had a similar thing occur to her last year and it has been a very slow healing process for her and her family.
I look forward to learning more from you soon now that you are back!
Hope all is good! See you on your blog soon!
Jacinta
Twitter: johnmcnally54
on December 3rd, 2009 at 7:54 pm
Yippee, another video free week Jacinta.
Perhaps I WILL restart the course soon.
Editing with a 2 day break enables you to read your script with ‘fresh eyes’. You will see mistakes that you overlooked before. Good idea of yours to read out aloud. That’s another excellent way to correct grammar. 

I prefer your version of the Masterclass course Jacinta.
John
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Jacinta
Reply:
December 3rd, 2009 at 10:06 pm
Hi John,
I actually found reading the book aloud was the best. I printed the book out and then sat there reading it. When you read aloud you hear how the words sound and how the sentences flow.
I found reading silently helped with spelling and reading aloud helped with grammar.
On my masterclass version. I have written summaries up to week 22, however now I have found out John has another 10 weeks worth of stuff to give us. That takes it to 52 weeks!
The last few weeks have been easy mainly case studies of people’s sales pages. This week he asked us to fill in a survey re the program. I mentioned transcripts to the videos would be good!
See you back here soon!
Jacinta